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Saint-Lazare's avatar

Cool story, would love to learn more about Lottie and that fog!

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GrousyGirl's avatar

so many mysteries...

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Nancy Waddell's avatar

Great story! Fog stories are so creepy, enjoyed this!

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Chip Spencer's avatar

This story was exceptionally well written! It had some bones to it! Definitely some dark Stephen King vibe to it.

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GrousyGirl's avatar

Wow, thank you.

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Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

Have you ever heard of Top in Fiction? Submit your stories. They are excellent, and this one seriously gave me the creeps. Great job!

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GrousyGirl's avatar

I've looked at Top in Fiction, but don't totally grok how it works, submitting and whatnot.

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Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

Just look for the Submit button and fill in the form. Have the link to your story ready to put in.

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