an experimental flash fiction story of forgiveness or revenge...
What a wonderfully creepy ending! Great job!
haha. Thanks.
Yep, really well done. You built up the tension nicely - and what a climax!
They could still reconcile, right? I mean…. well, maybe not.
Ouch. Creepy. You mastered the slow shift in tone very well.
Oh, thank you.
What a wonderfully creepy ending! Great job!
haha. Thanks.
Yep, really well done. You built up the tension nicely - and what a climax!
They could still reconcile, right? I mean…. well, maybe not.
Ouch. Creepy. You mastered the slow shift in tone very well.
Oh, thank you.