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Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

What a wonderfully creepy ending! Great job!

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GrousyGirl's avatar

haha. Thanks.

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Anndrais mac Choluim's avatar

Yep, really well done. You built up the tension nicely - and what a climax!

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GrousyGirl's avatar

They could still reconcile, right? I mean…. well, maybe not.

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Larry Shell's avatar

Ouch. Creepy. You mastered the slow shift in tone very well.

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GrousyGirl's avatar

Oh, thank you.

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